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  1. January 27th, 2003, 09:00 PM #1
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    Every storm needs it's thunder
    Filling hearts with intense wonder
    It is dais to be just a noise
    loud enough to scare girls and boys

    Shakes the house and rattles windows
    Loudly encouraging lightning's shows
    THunder echos loudly in our ears
    And is the cause of many peoples fears

    Thunder is to a storm its power
    Rumbling soft n low with a rain shower
    can be heard before and after a storm
    Rollin in abruptly but not wantin to cause harm
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    I like it alot!

    I'm just not sure how well "windows" and "shows" go together...
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